Tuesday, April 12, 2011

Personal Hell

smoldering glares behind frost
laden stares; ricocheting against glass
breaking molds; sauntering in lost
smoldering glares behind frost
tired bodies laying sins to exhaust
(he) who laughs last; has the best laugh
smoldering glares behind frost
laden stares; richocheting against glass

[Write a form poem.][I tried a triolet.]

1 comment:

  1. Nice - I did a triolet a few days back. Definitely interesting to see what lines will repeat well.

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