Friday, October 19, 2012

Flawed


Five Sentence Fiction is about packing a powerful punch in a tiny fist. Each week Lillie McFerrin will post a one word inspiration, then anyone wishing to participate will write a five sentence story based on the prompt word. The word does not have to appear in the five sentences, just use it for direction. Today's word is flawed.

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What you say has an impact, they've said; actions are stronger than words, they've said. No words and no actions and definitely no remorse led her to that moment behind the mesquite tree. “Hey,” the whispers of the leaves combined and smiled. The rush of emotions, thoughts, and insecurities washed through her until the world settled. “Hey,” she whispered back, tears filling the void.

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2 comments:

  1. I like it. I like it very much. You have a wonderful way of playing with words!

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